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This is very well modeled, but as people before have said, it can do with simplification. But this set is a really cool idea!

The changes that TheGhostThatWas suggested earlier perfectly fix all of the issues I had, I highly encourage you to update with that in mind!

Ah a good model but i have to say, it has an immense amount of detail, it goes off into other game territory. If you removed some of the details on the jacked and mask, i think it could work a lot.more

too damn busy

Glad you like the set tho!

Pyros default head color is black

While this and the other cosmetic of the set are really nice, they do look a tad too detailed. The other concern with this cosmetic in particular is the lack of team colours. The "main" colour or colour palette should be more in-line with the teams rather than the neutral greys and browns. It may take some time to get right, but I think this is a really good start overall.

Honestly I would love to see this approach to critiques & advice more from commenters; being able to properly visualise what can be changed up does so much better for modellers, in comparison to very vague descriptions of something not fitting.

Massive points to Ghost for that one

hey ghosst im gonna kiss you

np, glad you like it! I think most people just have a problem because the pyros face is so simple by default, so I think when they see a highly detailed mask like this, they don't see the same character. so i'm glad i could give more constructive feedback then just say "hurr durr too noisy hat." thank you!

There's a slight team color to the lenses, do you think it needs to be stronger, or the lenses should be darker like your paint-over?

That's a really cool paintover! It would have been great to get critique of that caliber while I was making this. I'll keep all of that in mind, thank you.

Oh I only changed the eyes because they looked like a neutral grey, so I tried tinting and darkening them to be the same hue as the brown of the hood. I think the lighting in the thumbnail was the only reason it looks so neutral tho

I think I'm in the same boat as other commenters that the model is too highly detailed. Although it's very nice. You could definitely take off a few things like the bars on the side of the filter and maybe make the nose smooth seamlessly with the leather so that it's one piece. I drew this paint over on the thumbnail image [drive.google.com], but that's up to you whether you consider that or not. I don't know if that messes up the accuracy for whatever mask you based it on, but either way it's a cool mask.

too detailed for tf2

Yeah. Sorry but for Tf2 this is way too detailed.

Ye, it looks really good, but it's too visually noisy. Perhaps merging the outer "edges" of the eye frame with the inner one, removing the bolted on bits that connect the mask and the cap could lessen the issue?

fucking great

tho maybe it looks fine fully in-game, idk

the mask looks fckin cool as hell but it also has A LOT of detail on it for a TF2 item..