This map is unique in its own way.

Weird clip brushes, the peice of wall down entering b site will slow a rush and cause a pile up. Way too many trees for my liking will kill frames on lower performance systems.

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@dingus stfu

Nice map.
Thx 4 it.

Not necessarily bad, but lacks identity & theme. Lots of clutter from props & some odd lighting choices. Okay, but would benefit from additional refining.

Seps or Pirates and the IDF

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a litte confused map

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Epic!+1!
Can any1 please check my skins?
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good work!
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Great work... You are better! :)

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地图还没玩过不过感觉挺有意思的

Nice work! +1
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So-so. I will be glad if you take a look here

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Brilliant Map! :D

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Great Map!

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yes

Very nice map!

I bet people who post links here didn't even check a map.

Nice evening map, need to be less yellow though. Yellow color IRL is from sun.

Yellow color should be placed at low angle where sun on skybox is painted (you also need to find better skybow with yellow sun And additional blue colored lights from top (color from sky)

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Hey!
This is my first job
Like this please

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subscribed, I like the feel of the pics

nice

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good

Thanks for the great feedback!, I have decided to leave this map alone for now, and work on another map with all the things that people told me to work on, and keep in mind what was bad and good for this map, again i really enjoy your feedback, Huge thanks!

Keep it up bruh!

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this looks like it was thought through very well, I like it, am downloading it right now, gonna try it out. Best of luck for you in the future.

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I feel as though you are lying about this being your first map, because this is incredible!!!

Nice job!!!
Feel free to check out my creations and leave feedback. Thanks!!
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i had the same problem with bushes in my map. had about 800 bushes...^^
sometimes more isnt better...
i changed it all, took smaller bushes and i think its much better now. you can see it here:

de_churchyard

Huge thank you for your feedback!, As said its my first map and i really enjoy good feedback on projects that i start, I know the bushes are quite eccesive and i have much to learn, i can tell you for a fun fact there is about 345 Bushes in total.. so yea.. But i still need to learn to terra form since i have no idea how to, thanks for the links, i have seen some of 3klik´s videoes good stuff. the competitive point of view this map i didnt think about upon starting, since im stoooopid, but will surely in the future look into making this alot better, the map is mostly a test of style and how to do stuff.. again i really appriciate you feedback! Thank you ...(My native language isnt english aswell and i know the struggle!)

(Part 2)
I recommend that you either redesign the whole map layout or transform it to a 35HP Knife Map. For this you would also need a radar and better lighting but you haven´t got to redesign the whole map because actually I like your theme very much.
If you decide to transform it maybe add hills around the map so that you don´t see the flatworld and I would be proud of you if you could add some cars to the street (or maybe just one) to make it less open.

I hope I was able to help you with my comment and don´t throw away everything - It takes time to get better at mapping!

Greetings
MegaRed (no english guy so the grammar and words used might be a bit fucked up :)

PS: If you want to get better at mapping I want to recommend you
https://www.youtube.com/user/3kliksphilip and
worldofleveldesign.com/

Hey, just took a quick look.
First I want to say that this map looks awesome from the view of a designer.
You figured out by yourself that the lighting and the radar are important to change/create.
Here´s what I figured out:
From the competitive point of view this map (sry for having to say this) SUCKS!
--> The Map is ways to small and the bombsides are easy to cover just from the a spot.
--> There are bushes EVERYWHERE, providing so much cover from beeing seen quickly (a NO-GO for CS:GO Competitive Maps)
--> I remember at least one spot on the map where stepping on a dumpster wasn´t possible because you got blocked by an invisible wall (annoying)

Damn son

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