For being your first is not bad by any means, the timing is so well done (I didn't have to change the offset). This chart would be miles better if the notes were falling from more readeable spots. What I mean by this is that you kept putting notes on the top half and the notes were falling from above. That limits the reading timing by miles and it's hard to sightread. Make sure falling notes come from the opposite site where the notes are located. Still not a bad chart!