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Also, here's a direct link to browse the fleet on SE Praisal [spaceengineerspraisal.net]
(JK Just posting personal lore. This is not canon and should not be taken as so)
Glad you took it as constructive feedback. Best of luck for your future builds!
Yeah I built the bridge without much inspiration. I always enjoyed the idea of something that didn't jut out the top, always hated the Star Wars designs for that bit. If you want to test it out in a game, by all means, try it out. :D It's tanky enough on its own to weather plenty of fire from ships of a class above itself.
In any case, many thanks for the critique! :D
One thing you could improve is the general shape of your ship though. The front starts out great but at the aft end the shape does not change much on the main hull, and that makes the part look monotonous. To avoid that, you could for example imitate layered armor and in such a way create accents. I use different colours in these parts too to make it stand out more. If you take a look at my newest designs you can see how I use it, or you can check out k_medlock, because he's the real MVP for that.
Same with the walkway parts. They look good if you have them cover small areas, but on a large surface their repetitive pattern is detrimental to the looks. One option would be to also use the gridded window pieces to break up the surface, or replacing some of the panels with solar arrays.
Overall a good start, especially since it was the first ship you ever finished! The ship is better than my first published ship. I feel honored that you asked me for my opinion, thanks!
The design language is consistent and I like the way you tried to avoid using the 45 degree slopes. This makes your ship look better IMHO because it removes the weird grey lines along the edges. That way you keep shapes uninterrupted except for when you want to. That is very well done. You aslo have some nice hidden thrusters, such as along the sides of the ship.
The interior of the bridge looks great actually, the crew has a nice view of the surroundings and along the front of the ship. My guess here is that you've been inspired by the Anaconda from Elite: Dangerous, the ship has a very similar bridge layout and visibility.
Apologies, ignore that other link. It's no longer the link I prefer to use. I was a dunce when I uploaded that ship design. xD I uploaded the world, not the blueprint. This has been fixed. :D
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1393136909
If you have the time at all. :P
But yeah, if you're planning on attacking anyone or anything in a survival server environment and you can pick from one of the two reviewed ships... I'm willing to bet that the Dauntless would be the better pick, since most battles are won within 10-15 seconds in my own live tests. You don't take chances, you don't risk anything, you go all in or not at all. :) Love these ships. :3 came here throught the ACI ship collection. ^_^ That creator recommended your stuff too.
Redemption Cruiser - Very tough to kill. Even after crippling the weapons, the amount of firepower required to bring all systems offline is staggering for a ship of this size. Recommend using this to frontline all assaults. Hope to GOD this design isn't released to pirates or other commercial users.
Dauntless Dreadnaught - Packs a punch. High burst damage. Volley fire is so crazy, most of my own designs were felled in the first two full 6-rocket salvos. Oddly flimsy compared to the cruiser mentioned above. Has very little in the way of protection and seems to falter rapidly if the enemy can mount any sort of sustained attack on any part of the ship. Even staggered, random firing seemed to amount to an unusually high amount of damage to both the hull and weapon systems.
Thanks for the compliments! Still work in progress, I have to make one where I talk abour the Ori Republic and the Endurance War.
I can use the lore you have already made but it would need some tweaking otherwise you are free to make new lore- I also can make new lore. I just need your permission and feel free to check out the site even if you are not interested!