Needs some STANK coming out of the top of the sack that floats around while you walk. That'd be awesome.

Me too @Doge
So wow.

I thought he was wearing that as an item. I was getting ready to insult.

Pocket Sand

jfc i thought he was wearing a giant bag on his back i am so relieved

Beans scramble enemies moving and precision.

You might want a different preview image. It looks like the sniper has a gigantic rucksack on his back.

That also might be the source of your "not detailed enough" complaints; none of the weapons look very good at that level of zoom, nor are they intended to be seen that large. It looks just fine in your (single) in-action screenshot.

To each their own really. It depends on your taste and personally I think tf2's artstyle counters that taste.

Also it's a halloween submission "contest" that you can find on the tf2.com blog.

Note: I did weather the beads and I did add brush strokes to the leather, I may revise this if I have the time before the deadline. It's not meant to be a super detailed model, I wish it could have. It just wasn't designed to be one.

Also, what is this "halloween contest" you speak of?

Still, this looks very under-detailed, and unfortunately the one I showed is looking better than the one here.

All and all, try adding minor details to this item, brush strokes, wear & tear etc.

@mrmarioman A bag texture like that would likely break art style. Tf2 doesn't really have that detailed of textures.

@obligatedCupid1: this is actually a submission for the halloween contest. This is suppsoed to be a voodoo bag that is essentially a reskin of Jarete. It would hopefully have it's own purple particle splash, but it would be up to valve.

I agree Hopkins, and thought that it's a little soon for christmas ideas.
Whilst the bag needs some textures, the way the logo looks is awsome! What do you propose it will do?

lacks textures of a bag, not asking you to be like this but look at this for reference
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e104/sgtr007/render-1.jpg

Nice idea!

I am deeply sorry that the thumbnail led you on like that.

I am mildly disappointed that this isn't a giant pouch affixed to the sniper's back as the thumbnail led me to believe