OK!
So these are my suggestions for the text in the scenario.
Have a look and see what you think :)

Cheers!

/Kongo


DESCRIPTION

On our way home from Tanoa we got hit by a missile and went down over Malden.
We need to find a way out of here now!



SITUATION

One week ago we left Tanoa and ended up in a refugee camp.
From there we started our long journey back home on a plane,
but something went wrong......again...

Most of us slept when we got hit by something.
We heard a loud "BANG" and shortly after one of our engines lost power.
The aircraft was badly damaged and went into a spin, quickly losing altitude.
These are the last moments we can remember before the crash.

Some of us survived, others not.
It's happening again...we need to find a way out of this hell...


TASKS

FIND A NEARBY TOWN OR VILLAGE AND LOCATE A MAP!
We have no map and no idea what's going on!
We have to get to the nearest town or village and assess the situation.

Search gas stations, churches, chapels, industrial buildings, supermarkets,
kiosks, barracks, bus stops or cars for a map of Malden.
We need to know where we are and where to find a satelite phone to call for help.

Beware of armed mobs and militia, they are well armed!
and check your targets! we don't want any civilian casualties.

GET TO A RADIO TOWER
Ok, we've got a map.
Check your location and move to a radio tower marked on the map.

It's our best chance to find a satellite phone to call for help.



EVAQUATE!
Help is on the way!
Get to the evaquation zone and await further instructions.
Time is of the essence. Move out!




SECURE THE HLS!
Spread out and secure the Helicopter Landing Site until the rescue chopper arrives!



OUTRO

We were saved...
Hopefully we will not get shot down again...