Total War: WARHAMMER III

Total War: WARHAMMER III

Feature for Azhag: Wandered and Lost
Kriega1 6 Feb, 2023 @ 9:46am
Potential rewrites for some text (grammar, spelling etc...)
Mad Cap text:

"To weaken the influence of Nagash's crown over you, your Shaman suggested drinking the potion made out of Mad Cap. While it'll certainly weaken the influence, you'll suffer from side effects, and will be in a hangover for a while." to: To weaken the influence of Nagash's crown over you, your Shaman suggests to drink a potion made out of Mad Cap. While it'll certainly weaken it's influence, you'll suffer from side effects, and will be in a hangover for a while.

Some of the possession text:

"The Crown's influence is weak. Azhag is in control of his body and the boyz are happy. However, the unhappy Crown is meddling with Azhag's mind and twisting his body trying to gain control over him" to: The Crown's influence is near absent. Azhag is in control of his body and the boyz are happy. However, the unhappy presence from the Crown is meddling with Azhag's mind and twisting his body trying to gain control over him

"The Crown's influence is weak. Azhag is mostly in control of his body but the crown is expressing his discontent." to: The Crown's influence is weak. Azhag is mostly in control of his body but the Crown's presence is expressing discontent.

"The Crown's influence is weak. Azhag has the upper hand and Crown is interfering a little bit to lure him." to: The Crown's influence is weakening. Azhag's will has the upper hand, though the Crown is interfering a little bit to lure his attention.

"Crown's influence is increasing; getting a faint vision of the presence." to: The Crown's influence is increasing; giving Azhag a faint vision of the presence within and the power that can be granted to him.

"The Crown's influence grows stronger; Azhag has gained powerful magic from it, but the boyz are outraged by his attitude." to: The Crown's influence grows even stronger; Azhag has gained powerful magic from it, but the boyz are outraged by his attitude.

"The Crown's influence is absolute; While the Azhag has gained a portion of Nagash's power, the furious boyz are revolting all over the place." to: The Crown's influence is absolute; While Azhag has gained a greater portion of Nagash's power, the furious boyz are revolting all over the place.

Temporary Reprieve Text:

"Amused by the progress, the Crown relieved the firm control over Azhag. With this little time, Azhag has to finish the Great Halls of Nagash landmark in Nagashizzar. " to: Amused by Azhag's progress, the Crown relieves firm control over him. Shortly, Azhag is expected to make his way to the the Great Halls of Nagash and search for the husk of the Great Necromancer. (Construct the Great Halls of Nagash landmark in Nagashizzar).

One with the Crown Text:

"Now, Azhag has become attuned and can follow all the desires of his heart without defying the Crown's will." to: Now, Azhag has become attuned with the Crown and can follow all the desires of his heart without interference.

Mushroom Drunk text:

"Due to the side effect, Azhag can't hold off and keep tottering himself. " to: Due to the side effect's of the potion, Azhag's feels unstable and feeble.

Nagashizzar Occupied! Text:

Same as Temporary Reprieve Text suggestion, though correct spelling typo in the 1st sentence for "Nagashzzar" - should be Nagashizzar.

Great Halls of Nagash Text:

"At last, what the crown has wanted has become true. We still don't know what the future holds, but the excited Crown gives free will to the Azhag while still bestowing the magical powers." to: At last, the Crown's desire has been fufilled. We still don't know what the future holds, but the contented presence from the Crown gives free will to Azhag while still bestowing him magical powers.

Allow possession text:

"Allow Full Possession||Situation is dire there is no choice left but to borrow powerful power from the crown. Crown will gain full control over you and there will be consequences. \\n\\n[[col:yellow]] Cooldown is 30 turns [[/col]]" to: Allow Full Possession||The situation is dire, Azhag feels there is no choice left but to borrow greater power from the Crown. The Crown will gain full control over him, and there will be consequences. \\n\\n[[col:yellow]] Cooldown is 30 turns [[/col]]

General Possession text:

"[[img:icon_azhag_possession]][[/img]]Possession indicates the strength of Nagash’s constantly increasing influence over Azhag. It intensifies if Azhag goes closer to the Nagashizzar or recruits skeleton units, but decreases if Azhag goes in the opposite direction. The influence won't change if Azhag hasn't moved a significant amount. Borrowing Nagash's omnipotence in the battle will increase the possession dramatically while having a successful Waaagh against the Humans will sharply reduce it. You can also use the mad cap to reduce the possession but it will cost you money and your leader's movement will drop significantly. You can be free from these debuffs by occupying Nagashizzar and building a landmark there. "

to: [[img:icon_azhag_possession]][[/img]]Possession indicates the strength of Nagash’s constantly increasing influence over Azhag. It intensifies if Azhag goes closer to Nagashizzar or recruits skeleton units, but decreases if Azhag goes in the opposite direction. The influence won't change if Azhag hasn't moved a significant amount. Channeling greater portions of Nagash's omnipotence from the Crown in battles will increase Azhag's possession dramatically, while having a successful Waaagh! against Humans will sharply reduce it. You can also use the Mad Cap potion to reduce possession but it will cost money and reduce Azhag's movement range significantly. You can be free from these debuffs by occupying Nagashizzar and building it's landmark there.

Raise Dead text:

"Raise Dead\\n\\nAny units in the queue will be raised and instantly added to your army.||You'll gain get more of them as the more casualties you have received in the battle, the more relevant units you have in the troop, and the more influence the Crown has over Azhag."

to: Raise Dead\\n\\nAny units in the queue will be raised and instantly added to your army.||You'll gain more of them as you receive more casualties in battles, the more relevant units you have in the army, and the more influence the Crown has over Azhag.

Crown ability text:

"Helped by his ominous magical crown, Slaughterer has come up with a shocking tactic called 'Hammer and Anvil'.\\n\\n[[col:red]]Crown's influence will reach max after the battle if you use this ability[[/col]]"

to: Helped by his ominous magical crown, the Slaughterer has come up with a shocking tactic called 'Hammer and Anvil'.\\n\\n[[col:red]]The Crown's influence will reach maximum possession levels after the battle if you use this ability[[/col]]

Also any mentions of "Waaagh" should be: Waaagh!
Last edited by Kriega1; 6 Feb, 2023 @ 9:57am