Dominions 6

Dominions 6

MA Alar, Dreams of Tartarus
isiarca 23 Jul, 2024 @ 4:53pm
Typos
Brainstealer Dragon: breath weapon is said to "statter" minds, should be "shatter."

Illithilich: description says "slained," which should be "slain."

Olm Hybrid Sage: description says "encounterd." Regular Olm Hybrid lacks this typo.

Flesh Shaper: "donnate" should be "donate."

Undead Worker: description incorrectly capitalizes "bones."

Trog Lobo: description incorrectly capitalizes "lobotomization."

Tartilliths of all kinds: descriptions say "such undertaking," should be "such an undertaking."

The Bond: commanders of all kinds get a "the" between personal name and unit type, so this should be named "Bond" instead, lest the game say "Ja'Amesh the The Bond". Also shares the Tartillith typo.

Dreamers of all kinds: sometimes capitalizes the d in "Dreamers" and sometimes not.

Dreamer Ascending & Supreme: "As they began to act like horrors, so [it] was that they slowly started turning into them," a really cool line with a minor word missing. I like the whole "cosmic horror entities not being immune to each others' influence" thing these guys have going on a lot.

Sublime Dreamer: isn't sacred despite its description saying it is.

Great Dreamer: never capitalizes "dreamer", unlike other descriptions featuring the term; conjuered > conjured; nurishment > nourishment; demize > demise; "chamber of dreamers" > "Chamber of the Dreamers"; Creaton > Creation.