Hi, great mod, you write Libirate British Honduras and at least another place in the focus three you write Libirate, it should be Liberate.

Oh, thank you very much. Will correct with next update.

Embrase in 'embrase planned economy' should be spelled with a 'c' i.e. embrace. The law it refers to should just be called 'planned economy', imo.

I compiled a list based solely on the pictures provided on the mod's main page.

2nd Picture:
capitalize "Joins"

"Unlike the 1931 vote, Panama has voted to join the Federation. Instead of bribing the Panaman officials, the Americans were only able to stage protests in Guatemala City.

These Protesters were arrested, and it is time to decide their fate."

OPTION 1: It is time to teach those American supporters a lesson! Execute them!"
OPTION 2: Put the American supporters into jail, or better yet, prison!
OPTION 3: Put them to work on Panaman railroad construction crews.


3rd Picture:
Los Altos Remilitarization:

Today we announced that we would no longer support our agreement with Mexico regarding the demilitarization of Los Altos. Mexico is looking for an explanation.

OPTION 1: Avoid any official statement. Our actions speak louder than our words do.
OPTION 2: We must celebrate this event with a massive army drill on the Mexican border.

Focuses:
The Capital of The Federation
Uncle Sam's Peronsal Lapdog
Subs for Fuhrer
Fuhrer's Algorithm
Invest in the Federal Tank Program
Invest in the Federal Air Force
Invest in the Federal Navy

Other:
"Central American Uninvorporated Terriroties of the United States"


Most of my corrections are adding the word "the" or adjusting capitalization/syntax. Not all of them are fixing errors, some of them are my personal preference, but I think most of them are necessary. Thanks!

My great thanks to you! Mine English teachers were computer games, Star Wars films, cute girls on Malta and Russian Hospitality sphere... so my grammar skill lacking a lot in department of proper written English. I spend more time to whrite one event than script focus tree branch)

Will correct all in next update.

Sup i know is little but in the division Template there one that is "infanteria de montana" and the correct spelling is "Infantería de Montaña" , I'm a native spanish speaker so if you wanna ask something go ahead!

Hey Grammar things go here right? Lots of focus descriptions could use overhauls on the wording to make it better

Develop Los Altos

"A Decade later the former Mexican province still lacks poper development. We should improve the local industry to secure the future of this border state." (Edited Version)

Remilitarize Los Altos

"More than a decade has passed since the Los Altos Referendum. Now when the Mexicans build up on our border we can not follow the strict rules thrust upon us by the United States. We must be ready to defend Los Altos!"

Operation "Polite Montezuma"

"The Headquarters of the Federal Armed Forces have come up with a brilliant plan to annex the Yucatan Region. Spies have infiltrated the local government and have bribed several Mexican officials in key parts of Yucatan. We could easily annex the region within 48 hours and hold a forced referendum. The Mexicans of Yucatan would embrace their true destiny no doubt... polite soldiers with guns would make sure of that."

There are lots more, some of the individual event texts need a few tweaks too. I love this mod and would be willing to contribute in any way possible.