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The Price of Conviction: Coyotes Crusade
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Thunderforge 24 Jan, 2014 @ 10:42pm
The Great Typo Hunt
I've found a number of typos in the scenario that ought to be fixed:

==Home Sweet Hell==
-In Coyote's room at the beginning, looking at the box says that it is filled "with my cloths." I'm assuming she doesn't have a collection of dish cloths, so it ought to be "clothes."

==Den==
-Once you have the keycard, your response to Slidestep can be "Hold on there Razorboy. Theres a problem." It should be "there's".

==Devils Lair==
-When you approach the dumpster, Ricky says that there is something "coming form" the dumpster. It should be "coming from"
-Not truly a typo, but the description when you first meet Devildive says "he'd been watching everything." I think it would sound better has "he's been watching everything" or "he was watching everything"

==Home Sweet Hell Endgame==
-In the loading screen text, twice it says "incase" instead of "in case" (the former is a variant spelling of the verb "encase", which is not what is intended). Also it says "Pacos" instead of "Paco's"
-When talking with Paco, Coyote says "So I guess that just leave that talk then." She should say "leaves" instead of "leave".
-Paco says that "Dills in the other room". Should be "Dill's" with an apostrophe.
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dryspaghetti 26 Jan, 2014 @ 6:45pm 
When you first meet Slidestep.
guages => gauges
passed => past
good nights sleep => good night's sleep

Not exactly a typo, but... when speaking with Mad Mina and choosing the "I don't want trouble" option, Coyote responds to Mad Mina instead of the dwarf worker she is talking to.

Going through Devildive's locker: dead mans locker => dead man's locker

When talking with Dill. Paco says he used to smile "alot" instead of "a lot."

This was about as far as I got. I paid for Voss to repair my card twice and never got a fixed card in return.
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Orzie  [developer] 2 Feb, 2014 @ 1:15pm 
You are absolutly awesome. I'm planning a final update sometime soon and I will fix all these typos! Much appreciated!:snaggletooth:
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meekay 27 Jun, 2015 @ 10:53am 
Originally posted by Avenzi:
You are absolutly awesome. I'm planning a final update sometime soon and I will fix all these typos! Much appreciated!:snaggletooth:

Hey Avenzi, really liked this content! During my playthrough, there are a few other typos that I noticed. Dunno if you're still planning on doing that final update, but here's what I've found:

  • One of the mission objectives says "meet Paco infront of the Devil's Lot" and a space needs to be added between in and front.
  • Another mission objective reads "Get passed the lots gatekeeper" and 'passed' should be 'past' and lots should have an apostrophe
  • In the apartment, (as someone mentioned earlier) there is a box of cloths instead of a box of clothes
  • Cassandra says "I'm glad their dead" instead of "I'm glad they're dead"
  • One of the Home Sweet Hell loading screens has a sentence that reads "You imagine Pacos mind is in the same place as yours," and Pacos should also have an apostrophe

Other than those really minor tweaks, this was a good quick story. Really enjoyed it!
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